Friday, August 6, 2021

alma

 this term we did this

this is my alma descriptive writing
i honest was so bored doing it not a fun activity
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2 comments:

  1. Mrs CostelloAugust 27, 2021 at 10:59 AM

    Hi Noah

    I hope everything is going good at home in your bubble?

    This is a great piece of descriptive writing that you have posted. You have used some really great language in your work. I like that you have compared her hair to Rapunzel.
    I thought this video was very interesting, she was very brave to go into the shop. What do you think?

    Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.

    Until next time

    Mrs Costello :)

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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